还在为雅思写作努力的小伙伴们，在这里要给大家一个小tip.我们都只到在写作里面，不管是大作文还是小作文其中评分的一项都是Coherence & cohesion,也就是连贯与衔接。而要有出众的连接，一种有效的方式就是指代的替换的运用，因为指代不仅仅让我们句与句直接的联系更加紧密，也能有效的避免用词的重复！下面呢，是BBC里面的一篇相关于F1车手Alonso的新闻报道，里面用了哪些指代，和哪些词汇的变化呢？

Alonso, 33, crashed in his McLaren during the second pre-season test in Barcelona last month, suffering concussion. The Spaniard will miss next weekend's season-opening Australian Grand Prix.

"I think there is more to this than we are being told about at this time," said BBC F1 co-commentator Coulthard. Former world champion Alonso is in his first year back at McLaren - the team he raced for in 2007 - after five years at Ferrari. It is a move Coulthard described as "not a marriage" but of just "pure convenience".

The Woking-based team, who have not won a race since 2012, have endured a difficult pre-season, with reliability issues plaguing them throughout testing.

Alonso's crash, which happened on the final day of the second test at the Circuit de Barcelona-Catalunya, was said to have been influenced by a strong, gusty wind.

He was driving at a speed of 215km/h (133.6mph) when he lost control of his car, hit a wall, suffered two blows to his head and was flown to hospital, where he was kept for three nights.

Alonso = the Spaniard = former world champion Alonso = he …
McLaren = the working-based team

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